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Here's to Never Growing Up by ZeBunnyzz

The concept of this piece is just awesome. I really like the blatant rebellion you have presented. The fact that the subject is a girl ...

Pen and Ink by artistfillmore

Your shading and line work is quite good. You stress intricacy and detail in all of your works, this is no exception. For a practice, i...


First can I start off by saying...this piece is simply gorgeous. I'm a big fan of sticking to the fundamentals of a character when crea...

Punisher Vs. Deadpool by Robert A. Marzullo by ramstudios1

I don't know if the light spot in the middle is intentional, or if it is an accident, but it takes away from the picture. Also, Mr.Cast...

Spawn with Power by Robert A. Marzullo by ramstudios1

I'm a dick so I like to point out the negative first. That being said, what the hell were you thinking? you're a moron for thinking you...

MARIO CREW: Cosa Nostra by Eddy-Shinjuku

From the bruteness of Mario, to the slender mob boss esquire about Luigi, this is a really well captured piece. Aside from actual skill...

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Character Descriptions:
Korsaque
5'10" , 215 LBS (strong not fat). Always keeps a mask over his face which is kind of like an army of two mask, or a hockey mask. design on it changes daily, like clothes. He is left handed, so pay attention to that. He has an array of tattoos covering a great deal of his body, however his tattoos are constantly changing (not like panel to panel, but when the mood changes, when different things are brought in place.)

Page 2:
He is wearing camouflage pants with the left leg torn off, mock-Adidas skate shoes (black with white stripes.)  Wears a white A-Shirt with a black hoodie.  Carries a black backpack with a skateboard on it. Has a .44 calibur six-shooter on his left hip as well. carry's a Corseque (medevial weapon, look up on wikipedia.)

Mary
5'3". Thin, with small-B cups.  Flat butt, not very curvy. About 16. Has hair almost like link 1, except for a few inches longer. She has brown skin and brown eyes. She has a tribal marking on the left side of her face, and her lip is pierced in the middle.
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She is wearing a striped (any color), shoulderless, long sleeved shirt.  Her pants are loose (well, for a girl) dark blue jeans. She wears black combat boots.  has a fake metal snake wrapped around her right forearm.

Page 1:

title page.  shows the tower in which korsaque and mary are in. you are looking at the tower from the opposaite side that they are on, so you can see all of the mountains around them and the sunrise really good too.


Page 2:
Location: On the top of the tower.

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  1. Korsaque and Mary are standing on the balcony, smoking (Korsaque is always holding one when mary is smoking but you obviously never see him put it to his lips) looking out towards the mountains. There is a storm with gushing rain. In the distance you see dogs of strange colours fighting.
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  3. The storm blowing down a tree. Mary: Do you think it will ever end? Korsaque: The dogs will settle down soon enough, Mary, calm down.
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  5. Mary: Not the dogs, Korsque, the bloody rain?
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  7. Korsaque, with an expression in his eyes symbolising deep thought.
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  9. Korsaque: All we can do is hope kiddo But for now we need to take shelter, it's almost light.
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Location: Main room (living roomish?). Has a round metal bowl in the middle about 3 1/2 feet diameter, in which they use as a fire.  On the floor is a rug about 8 feet long. The rug is a skinned, cat like creature, the pattern on it's fur is a blend of dark and light blue. 
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  1. Korsaque is bringing wood to the round metal bowl in the middle of the room. Mary is leaned against the wall with a daydream-like expression Mary: I'm not asking for much, you know. I don't want my family back, or to taste chocolate ever again. I don't even care if I get a warm bath in the future, All i want is to be...
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  3. Korsaque puts his hand on Mary's shoulder. Korsaque:Stop it right there.  Mary, how many times do I have to tell you to not speak that word.  The more you manifest it, the more disappointed you will be when your dreams don't come true.
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  5. Mary pushes Korsaque's hand off of her. Mary: Why do you treat freedom like it's something that has to be obtained?  I'm sick of our lifestyle. Korsaque: Freedom isn't free. Mary: Why the hell shouldn't It be?
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  7. KorsqueIt's not whether there should be wars, or beasts, or corruption everywhere we turn.  There is, and wishing for it not to be isn't going to make it so.  Trust me, I've spent years doing that.  Now i try and focus on the few freedoms I do have. Mary: Name me one
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Same location.
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  1. Korsaque: Well, I can still sing, I can still think, imagine, dream... Mary: But all of that is pointless if you are constantly living in fear. Korsaque: Fear is a feeling, like love.  Feelings can be controlled.
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  3. Mary, smirking: people can be controlled just as well.

 

    3. mary looks over at korsaque. Mary: why are you so down?

    Korsaque: I'm Fine

    Mary: Don't lie to me you have your daughter's face on your neck.

   

     4. Mary walks closer to korsaque

    5. Mary puts her hand on korsaque's chest "come on, let's dance."

 

Page 5:
amount of panels unimportant

the two dance, (more like father daughter then lovers), slow zoom out to some trees near the tower. the only words on the page are at the bottom, "we better get to bed soon. We need more food tomorrow."

 

Page 6:

    1. In the trees stands the figures (not fully seen, waiting for a reveal  of  course in the nature of good comics haha) of Salgamoah and his creature side kick. I think it's best i don't know what these characters look like as well, since they will be in the shadows for a few issues. so whatever your pen leads you to create. creature: do we attack now master salgamoah?

    2. Salgamoah hits the creature's head. Salgamoah: no, you

    ignorant  fool. they are in there home right now.

    Creature: Getting ready to go to sleep i presume.

    Is that not the perfect time to strike?

    Salgamoah: We are clearly in a world with no rules and no mercy.

    Do you think they would have survied the last 4 years without the

    brains to put in place proper security precautions in there quarters?

   3. Creature: Then what are we doing here?

    4. Salgamoah kicks creature. Salgamoah: We are waiting pet. paitently waiting.

 

Page 7

location: next day. in the woods. mary has changed her shirt and pants. she is carrying a bow and has a thing of arrows on her back, as well as a satchel that they put the animals in.  korsaque is carrying his corseque. clothes changed. mask has changed.

    1. mary fills up a lot of the page, with her bow pulled back and her arrow pointed almost at the reader. korsque is in background

    mary: this is about to be my second kill, how many are you at

    korsaque: i'm using my corseque mary, it's a bit harder

    2. MOUSE IN FOREGROUND with bow through it. characters in background

    korsaque: nice call kid.

    mary: you never answered my question.

    korsaque: 1 bird

    Mary: type?

    Korsaque: Pigeon.

    3. Mary: i win.

    mary is holding up her rat and rabit in korsaque's face.

    4. korsaque looking at the sky

    korsaque: we better hurry kid, the skys lookin like we won't be able to hunt tomorrow. we have to get a lot today and i  don't want our food to rot."

    mary (off panel): you're the one who's behind, hurry up.


Page 8:

    1. shot of korsaque killing a snake. other wierd creatures are in background. they only eat not mutated animals. so makes sure there is at least one on this page.

    2. mary killing a bird

    3. korsaque getting a fish.

 

Page 9: an even 9 panel grid. no words.

    1. korsaque spots deer.

    2. mary spots deer on other side of deer

    3. korsaque jumps for deer while marys arrow flys past deer.

    4. korsaque hits ground (korsaque explains why later, so i dont want to explain it again here, read on). korsaque lands.

    5. both look at each other in a shrug like way.

    6. both running

    7. more running

    8. he throws corseque she shoots bow (do i keep spelling this wrong? idk fuck it)

    9. arrow and corseque threw deers head.

Page 10: full page shot of corseque skinning a deer. his shirt is off now since he's getting bloody and all. mary is sitting by him.  basically something that looks cool but that will let this huge ass conversation fit. ready? here we go:

    M: why did that deer skid off when we both shot?

    k: i anticipated the deer would move with my jump. you didn't anticipate it because you didn't see me. so you missed. i     missed because i had a bloody arrow fly under my damned feet.

     m: so you had to have gone first?

    k: of course

    m: you aren't mad?

    k: when you see an unmutated animal thats actually safe to eat you don't think twice. well, when it's that big. if you'd of shot me over a pigeon i'd have made you skin this deer i got.

    m: who's to say you'd of got this deer?"

    m (again): Why do you use that fraggin weapon anyways?

    k: goes with the name.

    m: Really!!! Hahh!!! thats the lamest thing i've ever heard. how cliche.

    k: okay it's not as cool for you. you knew a lot of mary's growing up, i presume.  i've never met a single korsaque. not one. ole coresaque here is as close as i've come.

    m:so what you're really getting at is you find comfort...using an impractical weapon...because...mommy gave you a wierd name?

    K: we're connected. you wouldn't understand.

 

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    1. mary, walking away: if they weren't all gone, i'd put you in a loonie bin.

    2. korsaque puts deer in big high upbox (presumably something to keep it cold one might think haha)

    3. he sees his arm while doing it. it says brooklyn in cursive with a thing of lemonade above.

    4. korsaque sits down on the ledge.

    5. Puts hands in face (looking as timid and small as a dude his size can.)

 

Page 12:

    1. little girl around 7 holding a broken pony (you are looking at her through korsaques eyes so you dont see him

    Brooklyn: Daddy, can you help me fix my pony?

    Korsaque: It's broken, Brooklyn.

    Brooklyn: Can you help me make lemonade so i can sell it to make enough to buy a new horsie?

    2. All this page is korsaque's hand holding a 5 dollar bill out and his little girls hand grabbing it.  biggest shot on page.  obviously his daughter dies, and the reader will be made to beilive that it was how everyone else died (which im not sure of how to do it yet. maybe just not say because that would be more original then most of the other end of the world stuff.) Anyways, how she really dies on her way to the store. but that won't be revealed for a while. the only reason i say this now is this stupid shot of the 5 dollar bill and the two hands has to be pretty damn cool. that's what changed his whole world. but it can't be so damn obvious that it's sweet, but the reader should go, "sweet."  god damn i ramble. k back to the story.

    Korsaque: Daddy's busy baby. Run down to allen's and pick one up.

      3. Brooklyn: thanks daddy. jumping into his arms.

      4. Big hug.

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    1. Korsaque looks up.

    2. Korsaque looks at his tattoo. it changes to a picture of where they are

    3. There house sets ablaze on the tattoo.

    4. Korsaque:"Mary! Time To GO!"

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      Cursive writing, Mary's words, throughout page:

            Korsaque has me trained well. (shows mary getting her gear on) He protects me like a father (shows him getting his guns and a backpack).  Loves me like a friend (Shows her grabbing her weapons). And when shit goes down (shows him grabbing his corseque,

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    Cursive writing, Marys words: I don't want any one else standing beside me.

    the two standing beside each other

 

TBC....

   

 

 

 

 

   

 

 


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sorry ive been gone for so long but my computer died and had to get a new one. I did; however did get some new art work done. nothing really big just got bored; lol.
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Thanx for the FAVE bro. Im so glad you like my work. I would LOVE to see what modifications you have made with some of them.
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